Please can i have some help with my personal statement?

The adult game is economics. That insists you produce something of value for which you will recieve value (in the form of money). Too many believe they deserve resources for doing what they like rather than doing something that creates recognized value. Playing other people's music is of minor value...creating music that other people like is of greater value...creating music that thousands of people across the country like is of even greater value. The name of the game is to ensure your college efforts facilitate your reward to be greater than it would be otherwise. Philosophy, while excellent in making you better it usually lacks in making you more valuable. Electrical Engineering or Bioengineering makes you valuable to a whole range of people who are willing to exchange money for your services.